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A shift happens
That is, things slightly
Askew, I ask you,
“Where’d you find
the time?” In minutiae
it begins.  Akin
to a thin shaft of bright;
light slipping through the
slats in the blinds or the
knock knock of the rain
when it comes with
its tiny silver feet shrouded
in sheets and then there is the slightest
Nod forward toward silence,
The warmth tunneling into
The pits of our stomachs;
Cold air.
We may be still
As solidly fragile as the frozen lake.
As the dog-whelk, the porkweed,
As the icicle’s stem.
The winter’s still beating.
But still we may try,
There is still laughter,
Still the in-out thrum of the heart.
Still the blackness of night
And the unceasing notion
We call progress:
That is to say, there is
still the dream.
©2008-2009 ~pearlingrain
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tiny silver feet...^_< a good image always..
Oooh. I liked this one. ^_^

I liked the image of warmth tunneling inwards, or rather the feeling it evokes. The inside and the outside and flashes of change you register but don't acknowledge being affected by (usually). Little silver feet! *dances with you*

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That can ever be hurled
Fear to bring children
Into the world

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you need to stop being so brilliant all the time! :wow:

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Thanks for your praise. :) (As always)
wow, you have some of the best poems on dA! <3

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if only life were as easy as you!

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